this story is good so far but it feels like you're making the Mc grow strong too fast and making the super saiyan forms seem useless by increasing the multiplier for the primal form. overall it still a good story just fix what I mentioned.

Soo far soo good From 1 to 5 Good development No rushing Showing us how characters react Overall very good novel Looking forward to it Ohh and Thanks GOD no system here

well.... this mc is OPx10000. Before even meeting bulma for the first time. mc is already 12.000.000 in power level with mastered all the known techiques of dragon ball. including transformations. teleportation, Ki clones (naruto shadow clones) and more.. i like strong mc but this is ridiculous. i have read over 100 novels with overpowered starts like this and ALL novels were dropped. i give this author 50 chapters till he drops it.

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Quite fun. There are some aspects people often complain about in other novels like the MC growing attached to their new parents/relatives, but it doesn't bother me any bit. I also didn't mind the 4th wall breaks that much. There were one or two minor things that bothered me but that's about it. Grammar is good. Worth reading.

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I can't really say very much now cause you only started but I think your story is very interesting and I enjoyed reading the chapters there are. I hope you continue writing it so good. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Very interesting db fanfic so far.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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