Item: Birth of the Saiyan King
Rating: 4.6
Author: JOKER_JAY

JOKER_JAYLv43yr

2021-07-08 00:40

this story is good so far but it feels like you're making the Mc grow strong too fast and making the super saiyan forms seem useless by increasing the multiplier for the primal form. overall it still a good story just fix what I mentioned.

Birth of the Saiyan King

TheSliver

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7 Chs

Liked by 7 people

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