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FeartoFallingApart
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Now that I've finally hit the 15,000 word mark, I think I can leave a comment on my own FIC. In my opinion, this has always been a way to pass the time, so please don't take the story too seriously. This fic is just about an OP MC having fun in the world of Naruto and possibly other anime worlds. This is basically the first thing I write besides schoolwork, so don't expect any kind of super well done character development or super well built love relationship. This is just a wish-fulfillment story, so don't expect too many complicated dramas or overly complex plots. Also, I'm really not literate when it comes to English, so the story will probably be grammatically wrong... I'm sorry about that. Much of the content of the story will be unique and exclusive to my head, so if anything like the powers and timeline of a particular verse differs from the original works, don't mind... just enjoy the ride. With that said, I thank each and every one of you who took the time to read this poorly written FIC, hahaha.[img=recommend]

In Naruto with a GOLDEN FINGER.

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Nathan_Targino
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...vai vaoltar?

Gh0st00
Gh0st00Lv15Gh0st00

see now that's how an MC is supposed to behave they snatching the kids from your clan Go destroy them. keep up the good work author I'm loving the story

Daolord777
Daolord777Lv11Daolord777

I have to tell you it doesn’t matter that he’s and OP mc doing what he wants you wrote it smartly and the story doesn’t feel annoying and forced i hope you explore ypur talent in writing because if this is ypur first attempt you could have something in you even if you cant make a job out of it it could be a hobby that brings ypu a few extra bucks

Jama1810
Jama1810Lv4Jama1810

Is the mom going to be a part of the harem?

Premreddy_althuru
Premreddy_althuruLv2Premreddy_althuru

when will you next chapter i am waiting

noobageddon_
noobageddon_Lv13noobageddon_

Lemons??

SAURON_
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can you have mc go to mha and kengan ashura, bleach ,Record of ragnarok to train women into breeding slaves and "fight"/train his women against all villains and make "friends" with protagonist.

kiwami803
kiwami803Lv15kiwami803

I love this fanfic, you're doing an awesome job and I wait daily for the updates Thanks for taking time to make this masterpiece May I suggest that the mc create a seal to absorb bloodlines? That would be so cool imo

Chaos_Order8
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truly an epic story

Chaos_Order8
Chaos_Order8Lv4Chaos_Order8

So it's dropped hub?

RANDOM_MEME_GUY
RANDOM_MEME_GUYLv1RANDOM_MEME_GUY

yes

noobageddon_:Lemons??