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FeartoFallingApart
FeartoFallingApartAuthor2yr
2022-07-17 15:15

Now that I've finally hit the 15,000 word mark, I think I can leave a comment on my own FIC. In my opinion, this has always been a way to pass the time, so please don't take the story too seriously. This fic is just about an OP MC having fun in the world of Naruto and possibly other anime worlds. This is basically the first thing I write besides schoolwork, so don't expect any kind of super well done character development or super well built love relationship. This is just a wish-fulfillment story, so don't expect too many complicated dramas or overly complex plots. Also, I'm really not literate when it comes to English, so the story will probably be grammatically wrong... I'm sorry about that. Much of the content of the story will be unique and exclusive to my head, so if anything like the powers and timeline of a particular verse differs from the original works, don't mind... just enjoy the ride. With that said, I thank each and every one of you who took the time to read this poorly written FIC, hahaha.[img=recommend]

In Naruto with a GOLDEN FINGER.

FeartoFallingApart
4.5
59 Chs

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Gh0st00
Gh0st00Lv15

see now that's how an MC is supposed to behave they snatching the kids from your clan Go destroy them. keep up the good work author I'm loving the story

2yr
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Daolord777
Daolord777Lv13

I have to tell you it doesn’t matter that he’s and OP mc doing what he wants you wrote it smartly and the story doesn’t feel annoying and forced i hope you explore ypur talent in writing because if this is ypur first attempt you could have something in you even if you cant make a job out of it it could be a hobby that brings ypu a few extra bucks

2yr
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Jama1810
Jama1810Lv4

Is the mom going to be a part of the harem?

2yr
2
Premreddy_althuru
Premreddy_althuruLv2

when will you next chapter i am waiting

2yr
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noobageddon_
noobageddon_Lv14

Lemons??

2yr
2
SAURON_
SAURON_Lv2

can you have mc go to mha and kengan ashura, bleach ,Record of ragnarok to train women into breeding slaves and "fight"/train his women against all villains and make "friends" with protagonist.

2yr
2
kiwami803
kiwami803Lv15

I love this fanfic, you're doing an awesome job and I wait daily for the updates Thanks for taking time to make this masterpiece May I suggest that the mc create a seal to absorb bloodlines? That would be so cool imo

2yr
1
Chaos_Order8
Chaos_Order8Lv5

truly an epic story

2yr
Chaos_Order8
Chaos_Order8Lv5

So it's dropped hub?

2yr
RANDOM_MEME_GUY
RANDOM_MEME_GUYLv1

yes

noobageddon_:Lemons??
2yr
Nathan_Targino
Nathan_TarginoLv10

...vai vaoltar?

2yr
Akaza14
Akaza14Lv12

please update author san

8mth
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Xedornox
XedornoxLv1

Story is terrible. Author has the MC chose to be a Perfect Kryptonian with access to a superpowerful form of chakra along with perfect Uzumaki bloodline, yet despite this he doesn't use his Kyrptonian powers, he intentially has the MC fight in battles he could end within seconds while writting it like the MC was having trouble and worst of all -without any spoilers- forced multuple situations to build dramatic tension that the MC could solve within moments but instead choses not too for dramatic tension.

2yr

naraiz_ryhall
naraiz_ryhallLv3

Excellent Novel I enjoyed every chapter till now (14). Kept me up super late tonight. If you like OP characters plus naruto world this novel is for you. The only thing I didn't like was that I didn't know what our MC Looks like(red hair not so baby face that's it). Which is a tiny pet peeve of mine. Thank you so much for the read author Reading Status: C14 Writing Quality ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ Stability of Updates ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ Story Development ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ Character Design ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ World Background ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ The total score ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ (4.2)

2yr
lealkill
lealkillLv13

It was a okay fanfic, but the mother stuff just is too weird, really degenerate stuff. without the mother it becomes a 3,5 or 3, but with the mother is close to 1. ( i will not even mention that he's a ''kryptonian'' and has divine talent but still take ages to learn and master stuff, and he's pretty weak). but oh well, it was okayish till the mother part.

2yr
Solgalao
SolgalaoLv14

This story is just amazing, please don’t drop it ever.////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////::///:::://::::::::::::

2yr
Daoista7SJC8
Daoista7SJC8Lv1

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2yr
Celestial_Chaos24
Celestial_Chaos24Lv4

More Chapters Every Day Brother Heheheh Thanks For Novel Brother Hopefully Not DROPPED In Novel Brother And God bless you Brother Heheheh Nice Novel Brother [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
Zenron
ZenronLv3

Can you post this on scribblehub, now computer users can't read any fanfiction on webnovel it seems.........................................

2yr
ADHD_Guy74
ADHD_Guy74Lv4

very fulfilling story where power crushes everything. Please dont make this too huge of harem. Dont exceed triple digits. If possible, one digit only please, or at the maximum 10( and this is only if you plan to dimension travel?idk)

2yr
oceansage
oceansageLv4

Loved it so far. Definitely recommended. ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

2yr
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