Item: Avatar: The Fire Demon
Rating: 4.6

ouragan_Lv133yr

2021-08-18 20:45

the story is very interesting in itself. we follow an OC with knowledge in fire manipulation. I love the creation of the universe and the character. the world context is respected and their is no scenaristic inconsistency. the author shows a slightly darker side of the universe I like this fanfiction ^^ beware of spoilers: . . . . . . . even if I find that the acceptance by the other tribes is a little pushed, I remember that they are still at war and not cease fire. (it can pass if it shows the logo of the order of the lotus) but if you go up a dark side of the universe you have to stay in the theme.

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