As one of the only two ongoing YuGiOh fics that I've seen in this site, you can have my biased (maybe, I haven't read it yet) — review author-sama!
ShiningGlory574
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LIKEReal review here: I can honestly say it's good and entertaining. So far it's too young to say much about the update frequency (which I hope will go up, even if just once a week), and the plot. But I have seen some foreshadowing of a bigger, possibly original plot in the making so it's good on that end. The only real problem I have about it is its writing quality (can be pardon due to chapter size and word count), and the pacing being a bit too fast to be realistic. Like when the mc just accepts his new identity without much question, or when some paragraph-worth visualization is oversimplified to a single sentence. A lot of little plot holes as well, like him being able to use destiny draw by will alone or the fact that a supposed IRL YuGiOh player just sacrificed 20 cards to his graveyard for a single gimmick! Seriously, too much plot armor. Other than that tho, it's pretty good. Hope for the author not to drop suddenly and for it to last for a while. Great work for a first time!