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PxDaoist2yrReplied to EternaLoliElemental manipulation is the last one most possibly.
"You will be a new protagonist of the story. Only you decide how the story will continue to progress. Whether the main heroine dies or manages to find her sibling, you will play a huge role in that so bear it in mind. You've received three abilities from me. The Tempus of The Story, The Tempus of The Heart, and The Tempus of The Particles."- PxDaoist2yrCommented
Blessing Agent = Felix Felicis?
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More likely one of the princes eliminating the support of the other princes so that they have a better chance at inheriting the throne.
"One more thing. Contact his Highness. Inform him that he can start exerting pressure on the lower court." - PxDaoist2yrReplied to PxDaoist
Real review here: I can honestly say it's good and entertaining. So far it's too young to say much about the update frequency (which I hope will go up, even if just once a week), and the plot. But I have seen some foreshadowing of a bigger, possibly original plot in the making so it's good on that end. The only real problem I have about it is its writing quality (can be pardon due to chapter size and word count), and the pacing being a bit too fast to be realistic. Like when the mc just accepts his new identity without much question, or when some paragraph-worth visualization is oversimplified to a single sentence. A lot of little plot holes as well, like him being able to use destiny draw by will alone or the fact that a supposed IRL YuGiOh player just sacrificed 20 cards to his graveyard for a single gimmick! Seriously, too much plot armor. Other than that tho, it's pretty good. Hope for the author not to drop suddenly and for it to last for a while. Great work for a first time!
- PxDaoist2yrCommented
This feels like she has a Code from Code Geass, just without the Geass granting.
[Alright, then, good luck, Hanami-chan! And don't die again! I can only bring your soul back so many times!] - PxDaoist3yrCommented
How about using healing chakra from healing jutsu-s? I doubt that it's violent, plus the added healing factor would be good. Considering how infamous Jinchuuriki regeneration is, even with their violent chakra nature, it probably wouldn't be too far off to say that you would probably be a pseudo-immortal with being the Jinchuuriki of an artificial beast made purely from healing chakra.
First is the Ryumyaku [Dragon Vein] of the ancient city Roran in the Kingdom of Wind, and second is the Moryo sealed in the Land of Demons by the Witch of the Land of Demons… - PxDaoist3yrCommented
This feels like the Felix Felicis potion from Harry Potter. The 'luck' potion doesn't actually give good luck, it gives subconscious thoughts that will make it so it benefits its drinker more. I.e: the lottery, the potion will make it so you subconsciously calculate the most likely outcome of your draw.
"Well it feels like my cultivation is not fully stabilised, so it will took me around two weeks to fully stabilise it. So you can take Tang San tomorrow to hunt for his first spirit ring and I can go with you after two weeks." I was feeling quite a tingling in my mind that if I wait for two more weeks and continue to cultivate something good will occur, so I lied to Grandmaster about cultivation not being stable. - PxDaoist3yrCommented
...shakuton
"Sakoon! Vaporizing murder!" - PxDaoist3yrReplied to Ki_Sa
...there wasn't another one
They say that your life flashes before your eyes when you are about to die and Devin can officially say his was kind of short what with him being nineteen. He saw all the things he had done, all the things he hadn't. He really should have asked out Kelly Lee Stafford when he had the chance. Then the regret of not being able to say good bye to his parents seeps in. Devin was an only child due to complications during his birth, but his parents were still the best anyone could ever ask for. It was at that moment that they hit a boulder and everything went dark. - PxDaoist3yrReplied to PxDaoist
Forgot fire apparition :P
Semblance: Phoenix fire {accommodates all that has to do with fire/heat} - PxDaoist3yrReplied to Brokedepressed
Dud! Get an imagination! As far as I'm concerned he has; heat vision, heat sensing, pyromancy, thermomancy, fire constructs, some form of photosynthesis, some way of absorbing fire, escanor's sunshine, Phoenix healing fire, and ooh ooh! How about a logia body! Hm, what else... boom boom? Boom boom! Art is an explosion! *ehem*, point is, the only limit is your imagination!
Semblance: Phoenix fire {accommodates all that has to do with fire/heat} - PxDaoist3yrCommented
Is this the new term for isekai'd?
"...I've been ROB'd." - PxDaoist3yrCommented
...hot spring?
"Cool cool. So it evens works in an extremely steamy environment?" - PxDaoist3yrReplied to iread_apparently
That is evil
"So where's my vacation gonna be?" - PxDaoist3yrCommented
Speaking of the Uchiha, did he ever go back and get the Sharingan or was it destroyed during battle?
"To have survived against a member of the Uchiha clan and a squad of elite troops of the leaf by yourself is a testament to your ability as a blood mist shinobi." - PxDaoist3yrReplied to Daemon_Angelo17
Smoke grenade? Not Kirigakure no Jutsu? ...I'm sad
While he was looking over the developing situation, he finally understood what the distraction was. Thick white smoke was rolling in from every crevice. He had no idea how naruto did it, but it was goddamned effective. Tony aimed at the back of one group and fired. - PxDaoist3yrCommented
Is it too much to ask for people to make an au where hagakure has light manipulation as a quirk and not invisibility?
But now I look toward there was also UA uniform is floating she must be Hakagure the Invisible girl - PxDaoist3yrReplied to Jot_Ga
...Arm decapitation?
3 I still not to bring out true potential of Balmung but I still able to take on people like Todoroki or Bakugo with it which I felt quite good and also color of it's lightning is Golden in color since it not true Balmung but prototype of it - PxDaoist3yrCommentedCh -1 Author's Note