Item: The game of revenge
Rating: 4
Author: Luminous_Arcadian

Luminous_ArcadianLv33yr

2021-09-08 09:49

It's a good story with an interesting plotline. The story development was pace rather slowly, but it suits the plot well. Every scene was unfolding with a good description, and it was well detailed. There were just a few grammatical errors, such as the misuse of pronouns. It's minimal, and I think that this story would develop better.

The game of revenge

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