Review Detail of kebnez in The Author's POV

So wanted to start this off by saying I was not hopeful. But that changed quite quickly. For those of you who like fast paced op fantasy fuffillment books. This isn’t for you. Some of the sentence structure and beginning chapters were a little awkward at time, but throughout the book you really see the author fill out and come I to his own which I highly respect. Saw a lot of hate comments early chapters for mc but I think it was much needed and showed his character growth through the arcs. imagine that character growth on this app. Secondly: I like the background characters because they’re also fleshed out and developed. When introduced they aren’ really hit on much so you think oh another cookie cutter character, but over certain plot points really develops both them and their interactions with the mc. As far as world development haven’ seen too much of that due to them being in school but being near the chapter three hundreds we get to see a lot of the rest of the world unfold. So far really loving the work and keep up the good work author!