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kebnez3mthCommentedI thought ace was only two years older than luffy? So if he was same age as ace wouldn’t there be a discrepancy here?
'In any case, currently, I am only six years old, and nothing major will happen until I turn twelve, so I still have six years in my hand to plan out things, I think things will turn out okay by that time.' I thought to myself as I picked up the grilled rabbit meat and started to fill up my stomach.- kebnez3mthReplied to Needsleep2002Ch 707 Chapter 707: Stupid Elder Yang!
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The children yearn for the mines.
He wanted to mine deeper and deeper into the caves, but he was afraid of encountering some unknown monster. - kebnez3mthCommented
You should really stop adding these into the story. Takes out any kind of suspense it would have and interrupts flow.
And he wouldn't until much later. - kebnez3mthReplied to 1stSlug
That was due to the emperor possessing him though.
I mean Revan did so, so why can't I? - kebnez4mthCommented
Couldn’t he just eat it? Thought he took that ability from nel.
Between switching to Gran Rey Cero and unleashing his Resurrección the power of his Cero was completely unlike before. Hisashi did his best to form one of his own to counter. When they came to a violent clash in the middle Hisashi managed to hold on for a few moments, but eventually Grimmjow's Gran Rey Cero seemed to win out. It slowly started forcing back Hisashi's closer and closer. - kebnez5mthReplied to reece_campbell
I mean he does have two other Uchiha as disciples
Naruto had various Rasengans, and Sasuke possessed various Chidoris. This ninjutsu was also relatively versatile. - kebnez10mthReplied to YourGrandfather
But he is????? He’ been hitting in the girls the whole time who are like 12-13
This kid gave him some serious Orochimaru vibes. - kebnez10mthCommentedDaiki heard many a scream of shock and fear, but ignored them, his brown eyes, replaced with the eyes of Isobu, a demonic looking glare, a yellow ringed iris, on a purple ringed backdrop, whipped around back and forth, looking for his target.
- kebnez11mthCommentedAs if channeling that energy, the electricity disappeared from Guardian's back and turned into an electric bomb in front of its mouth.
- kebnez2yrPosted
So wanted to start this off by saying I was not hopeful. But that changed quite quickly. For those of you who like fast paced op fantasy fuffillment books. This isn’t for you. Some of the sentence structure and beginning chapters were a little awkward at time, but throughout the book you really see the author fill out and come I to his own which I highly respect. Saw a lot of hate comments early chapters for mc but I think it was much needed and showed his character growth through the arcs. imagine that character growth on this app. Secondly: I like the background characters because they’re also fleshed out and developed. When introduced they aren’ really hit on much so you think oh another cookie cutter character, but over certain plot points really develops both them and their interactions with the mc. As far as world development haven’ seen too much of that due to them being in school but being near the chapter three hundreds we get to see a lot of the rest of the world unfold. So far really loving the work and keep up the good work author!
- kebnez2yrReplied to Kasaber
He only put 8k out of 10k on the black card
A 500 U entrance fee was to be paid upfront, accompanied by a 1000 U deposit. - kebnez2yrReplied to Hazerithious
I believe it’s The flying Dwemer airship
The ship was a Brig type and I wanted to order two of it. - kebnez2yrCommented
I think its more referencing her knowing the story being a reincarnator and knowing what hes supposed to be. hence the “hes different” at least thats how im reading it
"He's so good! He's different, but he's so good! I can't wait...!" - kebnez3yrPosted
Really enjoy Everything about this novel is amazing. My only qualm with it is when you ise the word fatally instead of critically or seriously. To me when i hear that word i think oh theyre dying. And it gets thrown aRound so often it kind of desensitized the fights. but other than that i love everything!! Keep it up!!