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Zero_Onze
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2021-12-26 12:51

To start this is not a story for everyone the author is developing the novel with serious themes like problems of fitting into a reality, how people behave and act on it even not liking it and the need for when people should be realistic and when they should put a mask to hide .And a good story and grammar also without much problems . The storyline is geared towards the teen audience but with a lot of drama from what was read our MC male simplifying and a simp has trouble relating to people and therefore hides behind a mask of falsehood and so the story unfolds the female MC and all the inverse of it is open with everyone and a great judge of character knowing when someone is lying or not that causes your problem in the story , relationship between them start because of this point Honestly and the typical Japanese cliché story with love triangles between characters, annoying dialogues that makes your head hurt, think of it as oregairu only worse, honestly this kind of story is only for people who like this genre if not you will have to put up with a lot Don't be discouraged, author, your story is just not for everyone anyway, keep up your good work

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Zero_Onze
Zero_OnzeLv3

Honestly and the typical Japanese cliché story with love triangles between characters, annoying dialogues that makes your head hurt, think of it as oregairu only worse, honestly this kind of story is only for people who like this genre if not you will have to put up with a lot

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