for those hesitating to read because of people saying the writing is bad or read themselves the start but then stopped you should know that after chapter 25 it gets WAY better so read until then at least before deciding to drop please because it's the author's first work and he put a lot of effort into it, and it's sad to see bad reviews and the loss of readers just because they judged a book by it's cover. *for the author only* go to dxd pls

As you probably read from the other reviews, the writing quality does get better. Just power through it and you'll get to the really good parts. There are a few things that came to my attention though. The first would be the terrible synopsis you have written. I mean seriously, you get no information out of this. And Please Put More Words In Each Line Anyway, the story is pretty interesting. A dude who gets reincarnated into Tensura and gets OP real fast is always a good combination in my books. He also goes into other universes too. (Danmachi, highschool of the dead and Campione or whatever it's called) The MC is a crazy and cold blooded killer, so be aware of that. Being calm and nonchalant when committing genocide kind of crazy, to be specific. I like it but some don't. To each their own I guess. Just give it a try if you're interested and don't get discouraged by the worse grammar in the first few chapters, trust me it truly gets better.

The Great Author Reviewing Himself. I'm going to be honest this was basically a dumpster fire for the first 20 chapters I read it myself and it sucked but I can confidently say that after 25 or 30 chapters it was pretty good and as of now the quality of everything is unimaginable folds better, Do with that as you will

I hate that authors realise that there first few chapters are bad and expect us new viewers to suffer instead of actually fixing it to make it easier to get into because realistically if the the first few chapters have awful grammar and is a pain to read people will just not bother with the series, if the future chapters do improve with grammar i would recommend to take a break to rewrite the earlier chapters and make it better, it would help your story a lot to have a good start to it. Sorry if i come off as being harsh or simply being wrong because to be honest i haven’t read the first chapter yet, this is just my thoughts from reading the synopsis, i hope you read this and it helps.

a change a little better than when he was before a robot type protagonist who only followed the same steps to get stronger xD. -It would be better if there was a Pov of the sister, to know what she is doing and the protagonist socializing with more people (of course she has to be strong and a girl xD, since with her personality she would not pay attention to anyone ). - It would also be good for you to learn more defense and detection techniques, to strengthen your body so that when by chance it runs out of its powers (it would not be vulnerable, it would be like a saitama that solves everything with fists, or as a "one piece" that has weapons haki or dxd who can use toki to strengthen his body (like a certain demon that uses regulus xD)).

wha happen? you ok author? did the acc get hacked or something???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

It was an amazing story, but if you're reading this on a new account author, why was your account deleted? Just out of interest...................................................

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This story is good, but you know..... the torture scene here is not realistic, for example, the author doesn't describe the pain of the victim, also for the POV of everyone in the harem when Asahi isn't around.

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