Review Detail of Fritziest in Jacob Mornings

Item: Jacob Mornings
Rating: 4.2

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I think that this right here would have good progress. The character arc seems to be dark but it just all adds up. There are quite some mistakes but if worked on along the way, this ought to be great.

Jacob Mornings

chimychimes

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chimychimesAuthorchimychimes

ok, I will try harder. forgot to mention that this is the edited version. got alot of mistake in last one. well, I will try harder though it is painstakingly hard trying with a phone.

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