Review Detail of Endless_Suffering in MHA : The New Spider

Did you read the last part of my review? Cuz I said that I'll chnage it once you smooth out your chapters and, like I said, as of now there are many unnecessary descriptions and the repeating of the same things just spelt differently. Example: "I was growing both physically and strength wise" it's the same thing base on the context "I could now sense electrical currrents around me and developed an electrical sense" See? He basically says the same thing twice, now on the mext paragraph it says "Yes, every quirk has this energy that depends directly on how good your endurance is bla bla bla" it says 'yes' as if it gives an explanation on WHY it exist or even HOW he found out, cuz on the paragraph before it, it just says that he can sense ELECTRICAL currents NOT whatever energy this AU MHA verse uses. This is just a few of the errors that I've seen.