I like this novel so far. However I have one minor complaint that wouldn't deter anyone from reading this novel. In the aerly chapters (before the time skip in chapter 9), The mc was shown to have amazing skills like the smooth dribbling and the amazing floater. But in my humble opinion, those aren't skills you get just because you went back to the past and had the experience of doing it once. I think that if the current body is not accustomed to those skills it wouldn't work out that well. Anyway, that was a small complaint on my part. The story developpement is good, the pacing of the story is also good so far. However you also need to add a lot more details to the dailogues in order to make it more life-like as you do with the game description. Overall a good read that I would recommend people to check as it is one of the only two basketball novels I'm enjoying in this platform.
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Yeah the thing is, I realized that late, and in the later chapters and there are some snippets about how the MC's body doesn't allow him to be as good as he once was. I realized that it really should take time.
You're doing great, though. I don't know why you stopped your other football novel (which was one of my two favorites on this platform.) but it would be dope if you could continue with this one. Thanks for delivering us such amazing work.
Konkey_Dong:Yeah the thing is, I realized that late, and in the later chapters and there are some snippets about how the MC's body doesn't allow him to be as good as he once was. I realized that it really should take time.
