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2021-07-15 06:06

I really like the beginning of this novel, I am not to leave many reviews but there are not many basketball novels on this platform and reading Chinese novels is not very pleasant because it is all the same, I leave you a tip and it is that you try to describe the people in more detail because when I read I did not imagine the person, I also suggest that you try to develop more the personalities of each character, give a unique touch to each character and make it look less like a robot if you know how to what I mean, but this is just my perspective and you probably already have an idea for the future of history anyway I like the beginning good work

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