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2021-07-18 08:55

Migraine warning due to awful grammar! Good enough as of chapter 3 to revisit after being edited. There are some odd bits like the MC retroactively getting special gifts. This I believe happened in a flashback a month prier, dispit the MC stating its been two weeks since he regained his memories. I could be miss remembering but regardless it seems like the author's plan is that there is no plan.

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Hahhahaa. Chapter 3 is still on the moment when I try to find my direction towards the story. The plan of this story is to be an isekai but i change it later on on second chapter then in chapter 3 it still on my direction searching. If you read the synopsis or whatever it is in front of books i told you have no plan at the moment. I was just boring on my pandemic nonstop holiday. Well now I got some draft until volume 2 is finished. (Naruto is born). For grammar, I know it is hacked up English(told you in first chapter).I had no editor and quite busy now. And I don't plan to hire one (no money and this is no monetary project) . Unless it is voluntary. So if you wanted to see them to be edited. I tell you, it is almost 0% chance for it to happen. Maybe I would get 1 for my original story in future. IF I AM STILL WRITING. whahahaaa

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