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Benny_Manatee
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2021-09-30 18:40

Author supporting his work, as you do. This is an updated version, I'm deleting the previous one. I promise a quite action filled series, with a lot of schemes, some politics, and a healthy dose of revenge, to top it off. I like my plot-twists, so expect them (or actually don't, that'd spoil them ;) ) I managed to win Silver Prize for WPC #194 (I actually started writing this for that). This will be updated daily, entirely based on YOUR support ;) Finally Volume 1 - The Rise of Temptation, has finally been completed, and with that, Volume 2 is starting! Thanky you so much for your support up until now, and I'm hoping that you'll continue doing so from now on as well! :D Have fun reading, B. Manatee

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ProfessorofCulture
ProfessorofCultureLv14

the name attracted me, so is this going to be a harem, r18 novel?

Benny_Manatee
Benny_ManateeAuthor

The Synopsis says it all ;)

ProfessorofCulture
ProfessorofCultureLv14

😏

Benny_Manatee:The Synopsis says it all ;)
high_men
high_menLv13

Sooo I'm guessing there gon be some spicy 🔥 scenes, but will there be multiple female leads/ love interest or are they just one night stands

Benny_Manatee:The Synopsis says it all ;)
Benny_Manatee
Benny_ManateeAuthor

I'm gonna update the synopsis, I guess lol There's nothing of that sort really planned. MC does Temptation in other ways, and usually doesn't use his powers to tempt anyone into his bed.

high_men:Sooo I'm guessing there gon be some spicy 🔥 scenes, but will there be multiple female leads/ love interest or are they just one night stands
high_men
high_menLv13

thnxxxx

Benny_Manatee:I'm gonna update the synopsis, I guess lol There's nothing of that sort really planned. MC does Temptation in other ways, and usually doesn't use his powers to tempt anyone into his bed.
No_Name2
No_Name2Lv2

this book is not harem and romance

Benny_Manatee:I'm gonna update the synopsis, I guess lol There's nothing of that sort really planned. MC does Temptation in other ways, and usually doesn't use his powers to tempt anyone into his bed.
Shirubafokkusuhime
ShirubafokkusuhimeLv15

excuse me, Mr author but is that the only skill your character has? if that's the case then that basically just makes him an incubus... I don't know if I'll take this as an insult but that's a little dull for a story don't you think?

Benny_Manatee
Benny_ManateeAuthor

Look, to each his own. If you don't wanna read it, don't. If you do, go for it. Saying that a story is dull, before giving it a read is kinda arrogant, or naive. Can't decide. Don't mean to be rude, just judging you based on a comment.

Shirubafokkusuhime:excuse me, Mr author but is that the only skill your character has? if that's the case then that basically just makes him an incubus... I don't know if I'll take this as an insult but that's a little dull for a story don't you think?
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Shirubafokkusuhime
ShirubafokkusuhimeLv15

look, I'm not trying to degrade your story I'm just asking out of simple curiosity if that's the only skill he has? there are times where I do like to compare notes; I really don't know how else to say it…

Benny_Manatee:Look, to each his own. If you don't wanna read it, don't. If you do, go for it. Saying that a story is dull, before giving it a read is kinda arrogant, or naive. Can't decide. Don't mean to be rude, just judging you based on a comment.
Benny_Manatee
Benny_ManateeAuthor

I'm not trying to start a fight either, I just tend to reply in the same style as the critique/comment/whatever. First and foremost, this is a story with superpowers. It's not that it's only about that, rather that aspect is just the means to an end. Characters have a single superpower, that they can manipulate in certain ways. I don't want to spoil anything from later on, but there's a secondary system, but that's not about having a power, rather using your own body in certain ways, according to what you're good at. In that sense, no it's not his only skill. Furthermore, most characters are quite 'creative' with how they use their abilities, thus making them a bit more colorful. But then again, that's the opinion of the author. Take that as you will. And as I said, go ahead, read it until chapter 40, it's free, and if you liked it, go ahead and read more. If you don't like it after that, you don't have to, but please do remember, that I started writing with this work. In the first 40 chapters it shows a lot how inexperienced I was, and after that, I like to think that the quality gets way better. If your problem was only with the premise, tell me, I'll try to figure out a way to make it more appealing.

Shirubafokkusuhime:look, I'm not trying to degrade your story I'm just asking out of simple curiosity if that's the only skill he has? there are times where I do like to compare notes; I really don't know how else to say it…
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Shirubafokkusuhime
ShirubafokkusuhimeLv15

yay!

Benny_Manatee:I'm not trying to start a fight either, I just tend to reply in the same style as the critique/comment/whatever. First and foremost, this is a story with superpowers. It's not that it's only about that, rather that aspect is just the means to an end. Characters have a single superpower, that they can manipulate in certain ways. I don't want to spoil anything from later on, but there's a secondary system, but that's not about having a power, rather using your own body in certain ways, according to what you're good at. In that sense, no it's not his only skill. Furthermore, most characters are quite 'creative' with how they use their abilities, thus making them a bit more colorful. But then again, that's the opinion of the author. Take that as you will. And as I said, go ahead, read it until chapter 40, it's free, and if you liked it, go ahead and read more. If you don't like it after that, you don't have to, but please do remember, that I started writing with this work. In the first 40 chapters it shows a lot how inexperienced I was, and after that, I like to think that the quality gets way better. If your problem was only with the premise, tell me, I'll try to figure out a way to make it more appealing.
Daoist_Iveyflame
Daoist_IveyflameLv15

hey I was wondering if there's going to be any romance because the only thing the synopsis said is he's not going to use his power to get a woman into his bed and since there's not a tag I just thought I would ask if this is a pure action no romance at all or if there will be some later either way definitely adding this to my library I've read both types so it doesn't really matter to much to me but I am a fan of the MC having a woman to help keep his head straight I've only read the first few chapters but so far so good, keep up the good work[img=recommend]

Benny_Manatee
Benny_ManateeAuthor

Probably will be. Glad you like the story!

Daoist_Iveyflame:hey I was wondering if there's going to be any romance because the only thing the synopsis said is he's not going to use his power to get a woman into his bed and since there's not a tag I just thought I would ask if this is a pure action no romance at all or if there will be some later either way definitely adding this to my library I've read both types so it doesn't really matter to much to me but I am a fan of the MC having a woman to help keep his head straight I've only read the first few chapters but so far so good, keep up the good work[img=recommend]
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Houraji
HourajiLv3

The kind of MC who always got bullied whenever he went, even his parents as well, barely had any friend in school, and always thought himself as a useless being for being born with such a lowly power... compared to others who shot flame, blizzard, thunder and poison from their hands... his Charm wouldn't do much but to max the charisma point in the S.P.E.C.I.A.L points. Or is that so? Anyway, did you noticed that I use mostly past tense for the paragraph above? Well, I wouldn't like to spoil you more, because the satisfaction when the MC finally able to [REDACTED] those bullies... well, you wouldn't be that satisfied knowing [REDACTED]. Definitely worth to read and watch the MC do tons of [REDACTED] with his true power. Then, about the writing... it's clear and vivid, less ambiguous, telling the surrounding and what the character think and do, especially with the first person perspective, making it more easy to follow and understand of what happened. Then there's the dialogue. The dialogue is clearly the strongest point of this stort. Every dialogue sound different to each character---that sense from the annoying brads, the archetype of scaredy-cat persons, etc---giving them rich timbre (or tone color in musical term for rich-sounding music or dialogues in this case). The plot, I have nothing to say anymore as you must read it for yourself to get that sense of "take that, b****!"-ish. About pacing, well I think it's a bit rushing (at least in my standard) in the beginning of chapter when the MC had yet to found his true nature. Hoping to see his past being told as a miserable human, just to see him "return the favour" later on. Well no matter, the story development itself already alright, and I truly enjoy reading it. About grammar, no comment on that, since I'm not native speaker, and you seemed did a better job than me. With that being said, I guess that's all... Lastly but not least, I'd like to thank to the Author who keeps updating and writing this good story for us. Thank you... ^^ Keep on writing~

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