Review Detail of Zapheniah_Hayes in Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)

Item: Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)
Rating: 3

Review detail

Zapheniah_HayesLv131yrZapheniah_Hayes

bro mad respect for the author but I had too drop after the mc revealing that you're a comic character stunt. Like dude could have said I knew of raven and supergirl because of a future vision or something but not like that bro. Because let's be real you know what happens when that's revealed. I feel like your approach was poorly executed but maybe it was just me but mad respect to you it's just that your approach wasn't for me

Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)

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HQ_AlbertoLv1HQ_Alberto

This has happened several times in DC comics (Characters discovering they are fictional). For HIM, all this became real. Continuing to lie to the people he loves would only hurt him. In addition to giving the reader the feeling of falsehood when the story is read.

1yr

ALEX1402Lv4ALEX1402

I think even dc characters know they are comics or at least fictional characters especially because of presence of superboy prime they know there is a possibility of an earth where they are just comic book characters. But giving away your future knowleadge advantage is bad

1yr

DarkCreation101Lv4DarkCreation101

When kim dokja revealed to Yoo Joonghyuk that he and many other characters that were suffering through the novel he had recently finished were just characters, Kim dokja got off with a beating so bad that his past generations could feel it... You don't tell people that they're just characters, it'll make their past and present struggles feel meaningless, like they were just jokes that were being watched and manipulated.

9mth

SugmaMaleGamerLv4SugmaMaleGamer

Ayoo which chapter is that in omniscient reader?

DarkCreation101:When kim dokja revealed to Yoo Joonghyuk that he and many other characters that were suffering through the novel he had recently finished were just characters, Kim dokja got off with a beating so bad that his past generations could feel it... You don't tell people that they're just characters, it'll make their past and present struggles feel meaningless, like they were just jokes that were being watched and manipulated.

8mth

DarkCreation101Lv4DarkCreation101

Can't tell you that, just read... Last I read was about a couple years ago I honestly don't remember the chapter...

SugmaMaleGamer:Ayoo which chapter is that in omniscient reader?

8mth