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Baldysalino
BaldysalinoLv132yr
2022-10-22 20:02

because you lied and added harem because you lied and added harem

Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)

Draugzel
4.1
125 Chs

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DragonkingKyo
DragonkingKyoLv6

did they say it wasn't harem or have the no harem tag? If not then they didn't lie, but I understand the annoyance of authors changing tags if they did say no harem or had the no harem tag(as it has happen with stories that I read that have the harem tag then the author suddenly changes their mind an removes it)

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NobleKei
NobleKeiLv14

Most people just Nerf Saiyans in DC or Marvel worlds. But considering how good his previous DB fanfic was, i trust him to know about saiyan abilities in depth.

3yr

Kenrio
KenrioLv11

many things make me stop liking this fic. the first I the poorly choice of making mc a captive so you can limit his strength so when he reach earth he is not extremely op. second is how you choose to make him have 3 identy (civilian,hero and villain) extremely put of by a Sayan that care about the law of the world ( without counting how troublesome and painful for his friend that trusted him when it will be it's discovered, yes it will be discovered one day). third is what made me hate this completely you gave the mc the goal to go to the DB universe again. why would I waste my time in reading a novel that in the future mc will go to a world I'm extremely bored to read so much fanfic about(the one you write for example is from there so making mc go to that place when you have already a fic about it is weird).

3yr
Benjamin_Bebans
Benjamin_BebansLv1

the story was going relatively well, there were certain things that bothered me like the fact that he was nerfed and the triple secret identity but I decided to ignore it and give him another chance but the fact that he is a puppy of Kara bothers me since he does almost everything he asks and reaches the limit when he reveals his past life that he is a reincarnated and that they are a caricature

2yr
TheOneAboveAlll
TheOneAboveAlllLv4

The mc is not a sayian and is a disgrace to the Sayian race smh 🤦🏾‍♂️

3yr
Daoist423242
Daoist423242Lv12

If You don’t want an Mc telling other that he was a reincarnator and that everyone here is just a character in his world. even charles xavier became Crazy the moment he knows that he was just a Char. In a comics and even deadpool killed them because of it.

2yr
MomsSpaghetti69
MomsSpaghetti69Lv3

For people who don’t like stories that are ruined by harem don’t read this …….. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .…………………………………………………………………………. .

3yr
Zapheniah_Hayes
Zapheniah_HayesLv13

bro mad respect for the author but I had too drop after the mc revealing that you're a comic character stunt. Like dude could have said I knew of raven and supergirl because of a future vision or something but not like that bro. Because let's be real you know what happens when that's revealed. I feel like your approach was poorly executed but maybe it was just me but mad respect to you it's just that your approach wasn't for me

2yr
CH1LLGUY
CH1LLGUYLv4

It’s decent and recommend if you have nothing to read. Have to let you know though. Since I was close to dropping it. The MC tells his love interest that she is a character. Mentioning that he transmigrated. It was in chapter 33 or 34. So pretty far in I would say. Which really dropped my enthusiasm to read the novel. Will not put spoiler because I felt like that should have been done earlier. Not leading on the readers and coming out with that.

2yr
sin_of_memes
sin_of_memesLv14

hi looks like your making a new ff novel I read your broly and I hope this one is also the same as the other one. looking forward to see how a saiyan fits in the DC universe

3yr
creatorGod
creatorGodLv5

the Fanfic is descent, but the 1-Star is for forcing Plot and destroying any Sense of fanfic just for Harem

2yr
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