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Kenrio
KenrioLv113yr
2021-09-07 01:34

many things make me stop liking this fic. the first I the poorly choice of making mc a captive so you can limit his strength so when he reach earth he is not extremely op. second is how you choose to make him have 3 identy (civilian,hero and villain) extremely put of by a Sayan that care about the law of the world ( without counting how troublesome and painful for his friend that trusted him when it will be it's discovered, yes it will be discovered one day). third is what made me hate this completely you gave the mc the goal to go to the DB universe again. why would I waste my time in reading a novel that in the future mc will go to a world I'm extremely bored to read so much fanfic about(the one you write for example is from there so making mc go to that place when you have already a fic about it is weird).

Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)

Draugzel
4.1
125 Chs

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Demiurge_Ohara
Demiurge_OharaLv12

reverse flash smacked B. guko six ways sunday.

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DaoisteTvqwU
DaoisteTvqwULv2

nah they're pretty even

Demiurge_Ohara:reverse flash smacked B. guko six ways sunday.
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DIORYENIS_PERALTA
DIORYENIS_PERALTALv1

bro, what?, so what im getting out of this idiotic comment is that you dont like these types of stories, also having the character want to return to the place he was born and raised in, is a good motive, and if his friends do find out about his identity then that's reason for conflict, which is good. Also saiyans DO follow laws, they have a king which GIVES them laws. So, apparently you just like stories where everything goes well for a character, which is, in all honesty, bad taste.

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DaoisteTvqwU
DaoisteTvqwULv2

dude your taste sucks

3yr
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DaoisteTvqwU
DaoisteTvqwULv2

you do know that he would have been weaker if he wasn't captivated

3yr
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DaoisteTvqwU
DaoisteTvqwULv2

but they definitely have different laws than we do like equal rights because I have a feeling that most saiyans are just two sets of DNA from different saiyans combined in a cloning machine

DIORYENIS_PERALTA:bro, what?, so what im getting out of this idiotic comment is that you dont like these types of stories, also having the character want to return to the place he was born and raised in, is a good motive, and if his friends do find out about his identity then that's reason for conflict, which is good. Also saiyans DO follow laws, they have a king which GIVES them laws. So, apparently you just like stories where everything goes well for a character, which is, in all honesty, bad taste.
3yr
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Dayside
DaysideLv12

Saiyans follow SAIYAN LAWS. Not laws made by these weak humans that aren't even all that smart. Absolutely ridiculous

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Charlie_Sowern
Charlie_SowernLv4

I dare you say that to Batman.

Dayside:Saiyans follow SAIYAN LAWS. Not laws made by these weak humans that aren't even all that smart. Absolutely ridiculous
3yr
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G1LGAMESH
G1LGAMESHLv14

The humans he meant was the humans from DBZ you foking donkey.

Charlie_Sowern:I dare you say that to Batman.
2yr
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goku95
goku95Lv4

The is to beta if girls want him he should have gone with it instead of wishiwashing it saying Kara will be ok with it instead still dragging it I will say waste of sayen

2yr
AsianLadyBoy
AsianLadyBoyLv13

nope the author literally says that the MC would of course be weaker because he was captive. He was tricked when he let himself be fought because the guy knew that he was lying the whole time.

DaoisteTvqwU:you do know that he would have been weaker if he wasn't captivated
2yr
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King_Rycon
King_RyconLv2

That's That's fan animation, why are you treating it like its some sort of Official publication?

Demiurge_Ohara:reverse flash smacked B. guko six ways sunday.
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Demiurge_Ohara
Demiurge_OharaLv12

Dude. it's Dc comics, death battle fused MOST of R. Flash's feats into one burrito

King_Rycon:That's That's fan animation, why are you treating it like its some sort of Official publication?
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NobleKei
NobleKeiLv14

Most people just Nerf Saiyans in DC or Marvel worlds. But considering how good his previous DB fanfic was, i trust him to know about saiyan abilities in depth.

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Benjamin_Bebans
Benjamin_BebansLv1

the story was going relatively well, there were certain things that bothered me like the fact that he was nerfed and the triple secret identity but I decided to ignore it and give him another chance but the fact that he is a puppy of Kara bothers me since he does almost everything he asks and reaches the limit when he reveals his past life that he is a reincarnated and that they are a caricature

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TheOneAboveAlll
TheOneAboveAlllLv4

The mc is not a sayian and is a disgrace to the Sayian race smh 🤦🏾‍♂️

3yr
Daoist423242
Daoist423242Lv13

If You don’t want an Mc telling other that he was a reincarnator and that everyone here is just a character in his world. even charles xavier became Crazy the moment he knows that he was just a Char. In a comics and even deadpool killed them because of it.

3yr
MomsSpaghetti69
MomsSpaghetti69Lv3

For people who don’t like stories that are ruined by harem don’t read this …….. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .…………………………………………………………………………. .

3yr
Zapheniah_Hayes
Zapheniah_HayesLv13

bro mad respect for the author but I had too drop after the mc revealing that you're a comic character stunt. Like dude could have said I knew of raven and supergirl because of a future vision or something but not like that bro. Because let's be real you know what happens when that's revealed. I feel like your approach was poorly executed but maybe it was just me but mad respect to you it's just that your approach wasn't for me

2yr
sin_of_memes
sin_of_memesLv14

hi looks like your making a new ff novel I read your broly and I hope this one is also the same as the other one. looking forward to see how a saiyan fits in the DC universe

3yr
CH1LLGUY
CH1LLGUYLv4

It’s decent and recommend if you have nothing to read. Have to let you know though. Since I was close to dropping it. The MC tells his love interest that she is a character. Mentioning that he transmigrated. It was in chapter 33 or 34. So pretty far in I would say. Which really dropped my enthusiasm to read the novel. Will not put spoiler because I felt like that should have been done earlier. Not leading on the readers and coming out with that.

3yr
creatorGod
creatorGodLv5

the Fanfic is descent, but the 1-Star is for forcing Plot and destroying any Sense of fanfic just for Harem

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