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2021-10-09 10:35

Great story please dont drop. . .. . .. . . . . . .. . .. . . . .. .. . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . .. . .. ....

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Darwin111111
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Needs better character development. The main character was trained and got a lot of powers and blah blah. But she acts like a sissy who had never seen cruelty because a girl her age was being raped with her potato dead on the ground and then she kills everyone else. I mean, she only kills quickly. If she really bothered her, she would slow it down or give them up. But that's not the problem, she tells everything to a Korra that she literally met in ... one day. Not to mention that at the end of the story he gives ALL the money from the reward for the work (which was to find the son of a nobleman that the bandits kidnapped) to the girl ... can you see the high level of Sim? Well, the author thought that it was not enough, because then, only meeting a Korra of 2 days and that they have basically no ties in addition to showing the protagonist that she was beautiful, that if he wants me to teach him everything he learned in his life directly of nothing. I mean, she's a stranger. It doesn't matter if he's the president, unless he asks you or he's in a tight spot where he needs the powers, then you don't give them to him. Well, that's the reason, plus what I read in the reviews about what Ntr does to the protagonist, that I give this fanfic a bad rating. Besides that god thing that I skipped. Ultimately, this fanfic has potential, but the main character and the Sim's form of him ruined it for me. Besides that I feel like he will either actively follow Korra or just be abnormally important, scheming, or some kind of magnet for the main characters to apologize to him for any minor emotional wounds.

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