MC B*TA TR*SH LET IT TAKE HIS GIRLFRIEND AND HIS A C*VARD H*RN. B*TA S*MP TR*SH. N*T READ IF YOU HAVE A BRAIN. 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮😞😞😞🤮😞🤮😞😞😞🤮😞😞😞😞😞🤮😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞🤮😞😞😞😞😞🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮 S*MP.

well make asami know that mc didn't cheated on her and while she tries to patch up mc starts dating korra good ol'd drama ..................

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Needs better character development. The main character was trained and got a lot of powers and blah blah. But she acts like a sissy who had never seen cruelty because a girl her age was being raped with her potato dead on the ground and then she kills everyone else. I mean, she only kills quickly. If she really bothered her, she would slow it down or give them up. But that's not the problem, she tells everything to a Korra that she literally met in ... one day. Not to mention that at the end of the story he gives ALL the money from the reward for the work (which was to find the son of a nobleman that the bandits kidnapped) to the girl ... can you see the high level of Sim? Well, the author thought that it was not enough, because then, only meeting a Korra of 2 days and that they have basically no ties in addition to showing the protagonist that she was beautiful, that if he wants me to teach him everything he learned in his life directly of nothing. I mean, she's a stranger. It doesn't matter if he's the president, unless he asks you or he's in a tight spot where he needs the powers, then you don't give them to him. Well, that's the reason, plus what I read in the reviews about what Ntr does to the protagonist, that I give this fanfic a bad rating. Besides that god thing that I skipped. Ultimately, this fanfic has potential, but the main character and the Sim's form of him ruined it for me. Besides that I feel like he will either actively follow Korra or just be abnormally important, scheming, or some kind of magnet for the main characters to apologize to him for any minor emotional wounds.

One of the only avatar fic that is good , keep up the good work and don't drop this , don't be pressured keep calm and keep updating . dont know what to write just be calm okay

I really liked all the chapters that are published as of now. The idea is good, the completion is also great. The writing Quality is awesome, didn't see any mistakes. I really recommend reading it

By far one of the better avatar stories ive read in this site. Ront be put off by the rating. The only reason the score is like this is the griefing comments that keyboard mash just to be annoying

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Overall this is a good fanfiction of Avatar. It adds a lot of character development right off the bat in the story. I liked how the world isn't as happy as it is in the Avatar world which isn't the dark themes of the story gets me to look into it as it shows the darkness of the world itself. Then with the romances shows the complexity of the character which shows how unique he is. Although it is a wish-fulfillment story it doesn't feel like one, as we see the MC grind albeit not long, but shows there is development in the character itself. The updates for this novel are stable, and I hope it continues this way. The darkness of the story shows our MC a moment of weakness, it also shows how he feels about his past romances, in that he isn't the typical anti-simp idiot, he is related to us almost in a way that way. Plus he looks like Sung Jin-Woo, like who is hotter than him? Overall this story is really good, and I hope that it keeps going and updating.