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2023-10-29 13:59

Honestly, everything about the story except the ending was perfect. The MC was good, so was his growth, the subtle romance, the bits and pieces of comedy, etc. However the ending seemed a bit rushed as MC Avatar Aang'ed Voldemort. The writing quality is and has been superb throughout the whole novel. With the update being about 2 everyday. It is one of my top 3 HP fanfics along with 'Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector' and 'HP: The Arcane Thief'. Would definitely recommend.

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