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2022-11-24 19:09

Love the story. I have nerver seen a hp topic like that i hope you wont drop this.........................................................................

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Hi, I'm SrCuervo and I'm writing an HP novel where your help would be very useful, I hope you can read it so you can tell me what you think. It's called Harry Potter: Narnia and The World Hidden in a Closet.

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SrCuervo:Hi, I'm SrCuervo and I'm writing an HP novel where your help would be very useful, I hope you can read it so you can tell me what you think. It's called Harry Potter: Narnia and The World Hidden in a Closet.
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Chapters read at the time of this review: 363 You can skip the rant below if you just want a quick rundown of my general opinion of the story. The rant ends after the parentheses. Rant about the top review: (I can without a doubt say that the top review on this by Limitleess is wrong and if you don't read this book because of it you are doing yourself a disservice. This book may start off shaky but the points listed in his review are only based very early on, he was only discussing a few of the heavier topics that were there to show just how bad the situation in the wizarding world really is at that point and doesn't even last that long. The book generally calms down on the darker stuff like that after the Hogwarts infiltration arc. If you actually read books online long enough then you will find this level of dark topics and story as child's play compared to some of the truly dark stories that I've seen online and can wholeheartedly say that this book at least a good one with dark tones that fit the storyline and aren't dark for the sake of dark, but instead have significant base in the story and is even explained the reasoning of which later.) The only thing that I really think could turn someone off of this book other than the slightly darker tones of the book is that you can tell the book was made with some influence of Chinese novels given some of the sayings and references made in the book but not to the point of it being overbearing, just noticeable if you read them. in other words at least from me, definitely a WORTHWHILE READ. I just have to wait for every update now though.

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