The writing quality is really great, maybe even the best for fanfiction on this website. However, as far as I can tell that's really the only strong point of this novel. The story development is meh. Rather, there is no story development. As stated by another reviewer, ten chapters in and we still don't even know what year it is, whether we're pre or post rebellion, and the MC hasn't even left the "starter village," for lack of a better term. The character design is again, meh. The author does a great job of describing how the MC feels. However, as we have no information about the MC prior to his new life in Game of Thrones, there's no reference point to compare his behavior to. The author also tried to add some other characters from Skyrim, but imo they drag down the story with unnecessary filler that contributes nothing to the plot.

You need to speed up the story, 9 chapters in and i still dont know what is going on, is he going to meet the starks, what date is it, why is he still in a village, these are the questions i still dont know the answers to

This is perfect, with the other story "Game of thrones: Alan's Adventure" that you got your inspiration of, i had a lot of problems, because the grammar is so bad there. On the other hand this story has perfect grammar, very high uploadrate, nice storyline and everything else is perfect aswell, this is one of my favourite up and coming fanfic on this site. You also got a perfect explenation for why he was so weak at the start. I really hope you continue this story to the end, it would be much appreciated. Thanks for writing this!!! :)

The story progress is a bit slow, but it makes up for that in quality. Whilst I'd have liked a faster pacing, particularly because this is a fanfic, I cannot deny that if this was an actual original novel instead, it would have the perfect pacing. The frustration therefore is with the fact that the concept is really good and approached in a fun and fairly believable way, which makes waiting for the next chapter pure agony with such pacing. This is a story you'll want to binge read if possible, and one you will fear will not get finished before the author might lose his interests at the current release vs pacing rate. In the process of the story, the character seems to be growing into his skyrim characters powers and looking to develop them further. They are partially used for a headstart on kingdom building on the stony shore which is always fun and builds anticipation. On the technical spectrum that we judge on with ratings on webnovel there really isn't much to downrate this fanfic on. If anyone goes below a 4 star rating, it isn't someone as strict as I about the technical aspects but someone making an emotionally driven rating of some kind. In case anyone is blown away by my good rating considering I'm a rather verbal paragraph commenter, consider me a football supporter watching the match of his favorite team play when reading a story past the first 10 chapters. Draw the parallels, and you'll understand it's not meant the way it looks in text most of the time. That said. I do like the story. I like the overall perceived direction of it and I get annoyed at not being able to binge read it to the end due to anticipation. I see no reason content and quality wise, why this shouldn't be able to outstrip the other GoT crossover fanfics on webnovel. If it doesn't, then it's likely a SEO issue. Have a nice day.

This is a very good story, but my only concern is that it will get dropped eventually, like all the other stories that this author has written so far. Also, MC and his team are a bit too weak for their characters. I understand that author wants to add realism to it, but being realistic has nothing to do with it, you can add more details to make it realistic, you don't have to nerf the characters.

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Splendid work so far. I am at chapter 5 and i can’t wait for the next chapter. I really think that it can become one of the best got skyrim fanfic.

I couldn't make it past chapter 9. This novel seems to be going nowhere at all. Between the nerfed dragonborn and the annoying companions it's not looking that great even if it did finish.

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