Review Detail of Roonman in When Cithians Attack

I think that this is an okay introduction chapter and that it should be placed in a prologue volume so that people aren't confused. The first chapter doesn't contain any information, idk if it was an accident but yeah just letting you know. There isn't much material to criticize, so I'll try to give you a few pointers. Try to make your dialogue more natural, so that it resonates with the reader more. I thought the way you gave the information about the world was too direct, so maybe rewrite that since you plan to rewrite the novel. Other than, good job and good luck my dude! Keep writing!