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Andry_Reyes
Andry_ReyesLv13yr
2021-06-30 18:25

Only read chapter 1 so far. The only major flaw I can find is the commas and periods. I recommend using grammarly to fix those, but other than that, it's a good read!

Human Liam and Werewolf Ryan

Ashley7Black
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4 Chs

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Monarch_Of_Death
Monarch_Of_DeathLv2

That is what I also wanted to say, about the Grammarly

3yr
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catgotoutofthebag
catgotoutofthebagLv1

Well the story is overall good.Though the stability in the story was a bit on the not good side. I really liked Ryan's character.Knowing that Ryan will turn into a werewolf,i wonder if Liam would faint at that.It would be very funny . I am looking forward to next chapter,author

3yr

callow_dream
callow_dreamLv2

Liam feels a little too edgy but it's not like I hate it. It's refreshing. Rayn is the sort of character I usually fawn on. I am looking forward to more of his appearances.

3yr
US_DreamerDon
US_DreamerDonLv14

I have to say that I definitely liked the story so far. The pacing was great as well as the structure of the story. There is a bit of a nick pick and that's spacing between words. This could easily be solved by putting the story into a software that has a grammar check. I encourage all to read this story!

3yr
Writeditz
WriteditzLv1

RE-READING ACTUALLY SEEMS FUN THAN I THOUGHT. WHO ELSE SECONDS THIS? THIS IS IS INTERESTING, BRILLIANT, CAPTIVATING AND EXCEPTIONALLY GOOD. I JUST WONDER WHAT THE NEXT CHAPTER IS ENTIRE ABOUT.

3yr
Writeditz
WriteditzLv1

I've re-read again. It's just one of a kind. Any film producer lacking content for his/her next movie should use content from this book. Although the stability update varies, it's still outstanding. [img=coins] [img=exp] [img=recommend]

3yr
Writeditz
WriteditzLv1

SO SO SO NICE. CAN'T STOP READING. TRULY GETTING THE HANG OF IT. EVERYTHING FLOWS JUST WELL FROM RIGHTING QUALITY TO STORY DEVELOPMENT AND ALL. IT'S JUST EXTREMELY SUPER.

3yr
Writeditz
WriteditzLv1

Good and flowing order of events. Undeniably awesome. It'd be very hard to come up with such. Be it copied from a movie or anywhere, It's still complex. So I'd give the author a good review.

3yr
go_kizy
go_kizyLv3

So this is my first time reading something regarding parallel universe.. and i like it... the boys have been described well and the background is clear... just try be a little more consistent... good luck to your book!![img=update]

3yr
Gibran_Oliver
Gibran_OliverLv1

The story is very good. I love the chemistry between Liam and Ryan. I also enjoyed the amount of detail in the story. Looking forward for more chapters.

3yr
Garvita_Kushwaha
Garvita_KushwahaLv1

Amazing!!! The idea of werewolf is amazing and really interesting!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
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