Item: Human Liam and Werewolf Ryan
Rating: 4.4
Author: Writeditz

WriteditzLv13yr

2021-07-14 01:16

Good and flowing order of events. Undeniably awesome. It'd be very hard to come up with such. Be it copied from a movie or anywhere, It's still complex. So I'd give the author a good review.

Human Liam and Werewolf Ryan

Ashley7Black

4.5

4 Chs

Liked by 3 people

Replies3

Ashley7BlackAuthor

no worries . This was my original -did not copy from anywhere. bcz:

3yr

WriteditzLv1

Ur truly a pro. It'd take thousands n` thousands of brains to come up with such a story. N:B-not only the story, even the characters and event arrangement Great work Ashley7Pro

3yr

Ashley7BlackAuthor

lol. now I am just plain embarrassed .hehe, But still happy.

Writeditz:Ur truly a pro. It'd take thousands n` thousands of brains to come up with such a story. N:B-not only the story, even the characters and event arrangement Great work Ashley7Pro

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catgotoutofthebagLv1

Well the story is overall good.Though the stability in the story was a bit on the not good side. I really liked Ryan's character.Knowing that Ryan will turn into a werewolf,i wonder if Liam would faint at that.It would be very funny . I am looking forward to next chapter,author

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callow_dreamLv2

Liam feels a little too edgy but it's not like I hate it. It's refreshing. Rayn is the sort of character I usually fawn on. I am looking forward to more of his appearances.

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US_DreamerDonLv14

I have to say that I definitely liked the story so far. The pacing was great as well as the structure of the story. There is a bit of a nick pick and that's spacing between words. This could easily be solved by putting the story into a software that has a grammar check. I encourage all to read this story!

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WriteditzLv1

RE-READING ACTUALLY SEEMS FUN THAN I THOUGHT. WHO ELSE SECONDS THIS? THIS IS IS INTERESTING, BRILLIANT, CAPTIVATING AND EXCEPTIONALLY GOOD. I JUST WONDER WHAT THE NEXT CHAPTER IS ENTIRE ABOUT.

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WriteditzLv1

I've re-read again. It's just one of a kind. Any film producer lacking content for his/her next movie should use content from this book. Although the stability update varies, it's still outstanding. [img=coins] [img=exp] [img=recommend]

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WriteditzLv1

SO SO SO NICE. CAN'T STOP READING. TRULY GETTING THE HANG OF IT. EVERYTHING FLOWS JUST WELL FROM RIGHTING QUALITY TO STORY DEVELOPMENT AND ALL. IT'S JUST EXTREMELY SUPER.

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go_kizyLv3

So this is my first time reading something regarding parallel universe.. and i like it... the boys have been described well and the background is clear... just try be a little more consistent... good luck to your book!![img=update]

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Gibran_OliverLv1

The story is very good. I love the chemistry between Liam and Ryan. I also enjoyed the amount of detail in the story. Looking forward for more chapters.

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Garvita_KushwahaLv1

Amazing!!! The idea of werewolf is amazing and really interesting!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Andry_ReyesLv1

Only read chapter 1 so far. The only major flaw I can find is the commas and periods. I recommend using grammarly to fix those, but other than that, it's a good read!

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