Review Detail of Watergate_LAW in One Piece: Pirate Killers
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Though translation could use a bit of polishing, it doesn't really stain the great of a fanfic this is. It's totally a different take of character/attitude (specially luffy) and the indepth storyline in east blue, though its bad at depicting the environment (or they're just no interesting things/places on east blue). Btw please continue translating ;)
One Piece: Pirate Killers
Moctopus_Octopus
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That's great! Though its need some patchwork to read uninterrupted but definitely recommend this to anyone just for the idea and execution of the story alone. PS: How i wish to be able to speak and read in all languages so i could read any one piece fanfictions like a native.
Moctopus_Octopus:There is not much environment description, because author thought that you already have seen the anime, so no use in describing everything. And translation is just my bad, because English 2nd not native language that I learned, so I'm not so good in it Well, I’m going to be out of hospital soon, so I will continue
There is not much environment description, because author thought that you already have seen the anime, so no use in describing everything. And translation is just my bad, because English 2nd not native language that I learned, so I'm not so good in it Well, I’m going to be out of hospital soon, so I will continue