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Xuli
XuliLv33yr
2021-06-28 22:40

Feels preety interesting to me the character the scenes are well managed and their personalities are loveable too. I think this is going to be a great work from author. Keep it up and there are few gramatical errors but rest all are ok.[img=recommend]

Trapped in his obsession

Darkswan
5.0
29 Chs

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Darkswan
DarkswanAuthor

Thanks Xuli 💕

3yr
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Samerah_Kassim
Samerah_KassimLv1

Your book just began and i see it is your third entry into the WSA, it is well written so far and clearly this story has potential. I hope to read more and keep up the good work,

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Xena_Draxil
Xena_DraxilLv2

Firstly this is giving me Brothers Conflict vibes. Then I like it how the story is slowly and concretely building up. There were some instances where I was bugged by the grammatical errors. As far as I've read, I found the story intriguing and I'll definitely recommend this to all who are interested in this genre

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foxyash
foxyashLv3

wow...I'm hooked to your book author...it's an interesting book and I can't wait to read more......please update....wanna know what happens now. The characters and plot are amazing! Loved it...

3yr
Ash_Stay
Ash_StayLv1

I must say that the story is quite interesting and has a lot of potential. I read only some chapters and I can already see it's potential. Good work, Author

3yr
AreeSensei
AreeSenseiLv10

The story has some pretty interesting plot devices that deserve a better execution and would totally stand out with well fleshed-out characters. The author is working on improving it, so be patient and understanding. I feel there's potential in there, and all which is needed, is something more detailed and alive. Something more honest and true. So, go past the English mistakes, and give it a chance^^

3yr
Grandmasters
GrandmastersLv3

Go darkswan! I will leave a review now. This novel has a slow start and was likeable. The characters were solid and likeable. The narration was decent without obvious mistakes. A lot more chapters so we can be rest assured. Good luck with the Spirity! I hope we all win! 😁

3yr
bella_melodia
bella_melodiaLv4

Your book is interesting. The synopsis and starting have the capability to keep the reader hooked. The words are describing everything beautifully which makes it easier to understand and without lots of problems. I would like to thank the author for introducing us to such a beautifully designed world.

3yr
nia_94
nia_94Lv11

your book had a potential. I really love the cover photo, and it's attracted me straight away to read the story. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Akari_Uzumaki
Akari_UzumakiLv1

I must say after reading the first few chapters, i know that your story will be great and i hope to see more books form you, keep up the good work and congrats on your third wsa entry.

3yr
SerafinaF
SerafinaFLv13

This is a fun and light read about school life. The characters are interesting and interact with each other well. Looking forward to more chapters from you, author. Good job.

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