Item: Trapped in his obsession
Rating: 5
Author: Ash_Stay

Ash_StayLv13yr

2021-07-12 22:31

I must say that the story is quite interesting and has a lot of potential. I read only some chapters and I can already see it's potential. Good work, Author

Trapped in his obsession

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DarkswanAuthor

Thanks a lot Ash💕

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