I appreciate the honest review, and I would love to go back to writing this story. But the lack of ideas is making it hard, I want it to actually at the very least be mildly interesting to read.

i have an idea, you can use my oc to make the whole story interesting

you can use all of them if you want to. anyway you know "MLP: Frozed Edge/Jayawahid" it was my story that i need to progressing but i still to write the pokemon one, so i can't put afford into it. After all i just an ordinary midlleschooler

I had that problem with me too, but i made it simple. Now the project awakens, i had a slight problem on writing TipStir on my story because she just feels... Blant. I got enough of Stardust predicting the story and might as well change the course of events happening on FIM as a whole but not change it's core, sure there would be a bloody mess but that was the key. Sorry, i don't have enough idea to lit you up. Maybe you should start with your most favorite episode and progressively get the nostalgic feeling over time, that would help on make the story more alive. Maybe remove several cringe aspects will help, cause there was been a lot of things make one episode of FIM down bad. But it all depends on you, it is your story and also my motivation to write another story just like yours. Keep doing it, cause i have wasted 4-7 hours of my day to write a whole chapter. Hope you got enough motivation and time to write the next chapter, i am dying to write another chapter of my own story. Also, you can look up on my account where my story lies. Anyway, hope your day be happy and pristine. -Young reader