I think this is an amazing story. The world background is amazing. The character development is slow and steady and the original character design is really good too. There's almost no grammar mistakes so it's pretty easy to read. [Also, Jeff deserves a chance-]
Kernoel_77
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LIKEKernoel_77:Thank you very much for the review! I think it's important to build up character slowly, so I'm determined to take my time on it. Same with the world. Also, Jeff chapter perhaps?