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2021-07-23 23:39

Well as the story only had 2 chapters, there isn't much to review. But all I can tell you is that I crave for more!! I eagerly want to read the next chapter! I need to know what happened next! The characters seems interesting I'm definitely curious about Chase story to understand why he act like that! Really keep going your story is really good!!

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