I have read this story, but I think this type of genre is difficult for me to understand. The story could be really good if the grammatical errors can be correct. However, as a budding writer myself, I know how hard it is to write. Therefore, I just want to say, keep going strong.
shifu7
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LIKEThank you for review on my first novel 🙂 I really appreciated it my fellow Daoist As a newbie writter, There are wrong typos I have to fix. If I have time I will fix some of wrong typo's as soon as possible. As of now, I'm really busy at work. Please bear with me. I'm not native speaker but I'll do my best to edit some of my errors. Thank you so much I appreciated your review 🙂 keep safe my fellow Daoist 🙂👍