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Review Detail of kuhaku_sora in MARTIAL ANCIENT ERA: Strongest Body Ancient Cultivation

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kuhaku_sora
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It's an awesome read! The events are so immersive for the readers, and there is also this subtle comedy of the character's personaltiy and the way he learns the way of a cultivator. The only points i'd like to point out are the tenses mixes (especially on the first few lines (from "is" to "was" and "have" to "had"). Besides that, I think this novel is really awesome! ^^

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MARTIAL ANCIENT ERA: Strongest Body Ancient Cultivation

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thank you so much I appreciated your review to my first novel. I really wanted to learn from you my fellow Daoist . As a newbie writer I would like to hear more from you fellow Daoist 💞💞💞💞 thank you . 🙂