It's an awesome read! The events are so immersive for the readers, and there is also this subtle comedy of the character's personaltiy and the way he learns the way of a cultivator. The only points i'd like to point out are the tenses mixes (especially on the first few lines (from "is" to "was" and "have" to "had"). Besides that, I think this novel is really awesome! ^^
shifu7
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