Review Detail of dragonfly777 in Dragon's Blood, Wolf's Hide
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I seriously can't understand all those 4 or 5 Star Reviews. I know this is a fanfiction and as such logic isn't absolutly requiered, but come on: A 5-9 year old creating a trading empire? Right under the nose of the warden of the north with him not noticing? And then Lord Bolton openly attacks the son of the warden of the North with men in Bolton coat of arms? That's a total joke. The grammar on the other hand is decent, but sometimes it seems like paragraphs are missing or it#s too rushed. e.g. after the Battle of Seaguard and when Jon throws the head of Rodrik to his father.
Dragon's Blood, Wolf's Hide
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Author. Why do you take that criticism as negative? The criticism they have given you is constructive criticism and with all the respect in the world they gave it to you. Learn to accept such criticism so that you improve the quality of literary works since writing is not only light but must be taken seriously and committed despite being a hobby. In addition, it is not necessary that one must compulsorily write a book to criticize a person's book. Under what argument full of fallacies is that supported? You do not need to be a book author to be critical, what if you need to have read many books and if what the user stated is true, then you have a long way to go before you are a decent writer, you are still in the range of being mediocre . Good day.
BBQChickenAlertBB:well sorry you disapprove of the direction of the story and don't appreciate the purpose of the fanfiction. if you continue to not find any fan fictions to your liking, I suggest writing your own. its q great stress reliever as long as you don't push yourself too hard to make chapters every moment you have time.
well sorry you disapprove of the direction of the story and don't appreciate the purpose of the fanfiction. if you continue to not find any fan fictions to your liking, I suggest writing your own. its q great stress reliever as long as you don't push yourself too hard to make chapters every moment you have time.
BBQChickenAlertBB:well sorry you disapprove of the direction of the story and don't appreciate the purpose of the fanfiction. if you continue to not find any fan fictions to your liking, I suggest writing your own. its q great stress reliever as long as you don't push yourself too hard to make chapters every moment you have time.
