The story is really adorable~ especially the dialogue! It doesn't feel forced or cringey unlike any other novels! I was really hooked by the progression of the chapter! However, I do like to note about the switching of perspective. You could swtich perspectives to dig deeper through the characters, but try limiting it for a couple of chapters. It is advisable to focus at a single character until it's necessary to be inside another character for the next plotline. There are also a lot of lowercased letters that should be in capitlised form and missing commas. For an example : "Hey, Zeke!" and "You don't have to force yourself a smile, Clover." Adding these small things would ensure the smooth sailing experience of us readers reading your book~ Hope it helps!

This book is a sweet, innocent, unforgettable thing 💚✨ The progression of the story has the ring of a high school romance circled in marker around it. I really love it! My only advice is to pay attention to your grammar a little bit more for a better experience overall and to keep rising!

A great teen romance. The grammar is fine, world description is done pretty quickly which was enough. It the good girl bad guy kind of story. Clover seems sweet while I wanted to punch Zeke and her sister in first two-three chapters. Author you will need to give him a strong reason to hate Clover or it will be Christian Grey or Harrod all over again.

The story is captivating. It's cute and has a smooth pace which is a plus point. I like the way you write the scenarios. Good job, author! Hope to see more of the good work!

I really liked the story, by the way, I found it to be a cute budding love story. Author, I have very high hope for this story. looking for more ...

Overall - This is a very good novel to read. It is written from the first person point of view (multiple point of views). If you want to read a book full of thrills, look no further than this. Highly recommended. Style - The author is using first person narration style with multiple point of views. We are able to see the world through the character's eyes. Well executed. Updating - As a writer myself, I give kudos to the author. Wtiting is very hard. I'm giving the autho 5 in this aspect. Story - Well planned. Story linen is the heart of any novel, and this novel did a good job on its story. Hard to put down. Grammar - Excellent use of the grammar. No complaint on this aspect. The flow of the story is smooth which shows the effort that the author is putting into the writing. Commendable. Character - The characters are well written and designed. They fitted their roles. The other characters are well catered for too. Kudos to the author. World: Its based on the fantasy genre settings. The author put great effort into this and it was perfect. Well done.

The story is really cute... I liked it. I hope you take notice of the lowercase letters when you begin a conversation and maybe break the dense paragraphs. Apart from all this, I think this story is a cute teen romance. Good luck, Author!

Writing Quality: Good and readable Updating Stability: Superb and always updated! Story Development: Nice pacing Character Design: It's nice and clean World Background: Had enough to engage more readers.

This teenage novel is a cute one. The FL is a sweet charming girl with hidden fire in her personality while the ML starts with the cool uncaring demeanor that I anticipate will change along the course of the story. It's sweet, innocent and promising. Like the other reviewers said you can try fixing the typos if you can. Keep going, Lovely author. 👍😊