Good story with a lot of promise I could see it continuing for a long while since there’s a lot of time and content to play with. MC background is dope and his cheat ain’t to op but is more practical making the story enjoyable. Grammar is solid and not much to say about world background since there’s plenty to work with in one piece with a decent amount being already fleshed out but with still enough unknowns that the author can take his own creative spin on it. Looking forward to future chapters and seeing what the MC will do and who he will recruit in the future.
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