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Pilotfranco
PilotfrancoLv131yr
2023-02-24 14:49

Honestly if you read skip the first 14 chapters. it is so boring and written horribly. The author made a lot of ominous hints for no reason the ruin the childhood arc. The parents are horrible characters too, I get this is a au but au are usually meant to be reasonable. both parents have all theee haki and are unreasonably strong and also posses stupid op devil fruits. lame. Then the mc a reincarnated person acts like a literal child not to not draw suspicion but because it’s his personality. I’ve only read to chapter 15 so it might get better but my god

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