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Gilgamesh0000001
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2022-05-19 23:04

the story is paced perfectly and the characters power gaining is at good speed. liking how the crew building on going can't wait to see more interaction with other charecters and see how far Achilles achievements cam take him. the fights are good but feel a bit short. spade pirates is ace group name ifk why that is bit OK and let's see how it goes. the update time is good. nice e e e ee e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e e

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Sinbad_12
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I read up to chapter 32 currently and gotta say it's a very good story. The author's other book is one of my favorites on this site. But that's enough about the author, let's talk about this story. The writing quality is pretty good as they are very few grammar mistakes, I noticed they are quickly fixed within a moment's notice. The author conveys what he trying to say quite easily. So you understand what he trying to do in each chapter. And the author has an editor who seems to be pretty good at his job as well. Now for the stability of updates, it's amazing. The author posts a chapter daily which is just amazing to me. For his other stories, the updates were so random. From what I could he had no schedule but for this story, it seems like he has one. So good on him for that. As for story development, to me it's perfect so far. The main character, Achilles is the son of a D and a former celestial dragon. But the main character isn't born just because of that. He doesn't have a special body like big mom but instead trains like a normal person. And so far the main character's level of strength makes sense within the world. As he isn't some sort of out-of-the-world character. He's still weak in the grand scheme of things. Also, the author flashes the characters and ideas in the story. He drops some hints and clues about certain things that will happen in the future which I appreciate. As the author isn't pulling stuff out of anywhere. As for the character design, not much to say about this part. They are good. I can't say much for the world background as it's One Piece. You can't mess it up unless you're trying to on purpose. But even then the author is adding his little twists which make sense within the world of One Piece. Which I really like as he isn't breaking the limits of the world. And that's my review which now reading it seems to be too long, lol.

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