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CabbageSon
CabbageSonLv121yr
2023-05-18 09:04

This story have potential. But underdeveloped. The story was too rushed, and after the world or arc end there's no closure. It just kinda ends abruptly. I really like the main idea of the story. I also like the character, but even there was some character development it was not told how they change. they just change, again, abruptly. From the announcement the author seem to want to rewrite from the first arc. I hope they give the character to develop slowly along with the plot.

QT: Forget Being A Villain, I’ll Just Spoil My Wife [BL]

ciaociia
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29 Chs

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XXELL
XXELLLv2

I don’t even need to see the future chapters to know this book is so amazing! I really like the story it is my top first recommended. I was very excited since i liked the description and i was RIGHT!!! Keep up the good work! ‘(^u^)’

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mashumash
mashumashLv3

i know its a bit too early for me to leave a review but YOUR WORK IS SO GOOD OMG. im officially your number one fan! i thought it would be all sweetness judging by the cover and descroption but i was wrong 😭 three chapters in and im already depressed. i really love how our MC takes care of ML hes everything i want in a guy 😭 this is the first one ive read where the top isnt mean and rude to the bottom. he an is so gentle <3 especially when (spoilers?) he wraps his robe for qiu xiu to wear cause he was scared 🥺 ALSO IM OFFICIALLY QI XIUS BIG SISTER. i love his character, i hope you wont make him suffer too much 😢 hes such a precious baby plS

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bubblebunnytea
bubblebunnyteaLv3

it's soo sweet and fluffyyyyy most of vewy healingggg chooo cuteeeee ... usually seme mcs ain't my cup of tea, but this one is sooooo soothing, the healing , ughhh I wanna adopted them themmmmm

3yr
Benny_Lokku
Benny_LokkuLv1

mate. i made an account just to write this review i have high hopes. i hope you update consistently and do not mess up the character. im putting my faith in you ps: giving it a 5 so some attention can come it :)

3yr
26stars
26starsLv12

I don't understand why this book doesn't have enough ratings. I mean, this book is well-written and deserves five stars rating. This book is professionally written. I love how the author described the situation. It's so detailed and I can imagine every scene easily. But, the cover is too dark, I think. It's a bit unclear that I hesitated at first before deciding to give this book a try. Overall, I love this book! 🥰

3yr
Aimi_666
Aimi_666Lv1

First arc is over and am crying. He an and Xiu Xiu too sweet ;^; Your writing is consistent and the plot keep me interested and wanting more! The characters are all so lovable tOO. Im still veeeeery sad That An an will have to say goodbYe to our cub ;^; Please keep up the great work

3yr
Daoist621222
Daoist621222Lv1

I'm from Brazil and I love this story!!!! It's great and I look forward to the next chapters. Sooooooooo goood

3yr
huomian1235
huomian1235Lv2

Hey author pls update I can't wait to read more!! Don't drop it it's such a nice novel! loving it!! . . . .

2yr
ManhwaAddict
ManhwaAddictLv2

Author-nim! This story is amazing! This story is just my type. Mc is seme and has powerful characters. I wonder how arc 2 is gonna go with MC still so in love. And even if he does fall in love again I wonder how he's gonna deal with this personality switch.

3yr
Akio_Ayuzawa
Akio_AyuzawaLv3

Hello Author-San I'm your new reader and a typical silent reader, i want to say that i love your work in this book especially the characters are very interesting to read especially the MC cause is very rare to read a good book of MC being a Seme in the story 💁. So keep it up a good work and have a nice day Author-San 😊 P.S sorry for my grammar Author-San 😅

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