Review Detail of Crown_of_Flame in With You In Me

When I read the synopsis I realized that it is a deep topic. If carry out well, it could show many things. And I wish you would be able to do it perfectly though you are doing fine in the first chapter. The one thing I noticed is the grammatical mistakes apart from that I have not seen any other flaws. Keep up with your work you'll do it great. [img=recommend]