With You In Me
novel - Realistic Fiction

With You In Me


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What is With You In Me

Read With You In Me novel written by the author Gabriel_Hill4Real on Webnovel, This serial novel genre is Realistic Fiction stories, covering death, pregnancy, teenager, webnovelspirityawardspring2021, webnovelspirityawardsspring. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved


It's hard to be a parent. It's even harder to be a teen parent or a single parent, but the hardest of them all is being a teen parent to a child that doesn't belong to you. Chigozie Okorie, a secondary school student whose brother left behind a pregnant girl and an unborn child after his appalling death is left to handle what his late brother started. Will he be able to face the punishment he doesn't deserve or will he back out before the end of it all?

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The first chapter is amazing. I like the way the writer gave his main character and actual personality, unlike some other writers. I'm looking forward to chapter two and the other ones to come. Good luck on your writing journey.


Great start. With You In Me is littered with analogies and deeper meanings. The author's writing style has a smooth flow, and the novel covers real world struggles of the mind. The only suggestion I'd have is to use commas. Other than that, it's near perfect : )


I love the title. It sounds like it will be a very emotional book. But i feel like his brother shouldn't always be the cold type. Maybe he could unlock his inner self. Because most cold people insides are just like a marshmallow


When I read the synopsis I realized that it is a deep topic. If carry out well, it could show many things. And I wish you would be able to do it perfectly though you are doing fine in the first chapter. The one thing I noticed is the grammatical mistakes apart from that I have not seen any other flaws. Keep up with your work you'll do it great. [img=recommend]


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