Decent story but it feels inconsistent, like the fact that the Mc’s background is discarded in chapter 1 he goes from fearing monsters all his life to a complete 180 in less than 5 paragraphs with no context on why.
Jin is also questioning himself why he's not afraid of monsters anymore (Chapter 1). And about his background... You noticed that they don't have last names right? Their last names hold the answers. Keep reading and maybe your whys can be answered. Thanks and love a lots <3