I love how pessimistic the guy is lol, rip his parents though. I think this is an interesting story, especially because it's reincarnation after a tragedy so there's a different kind of incentive for him to change worlds. The grammar and word structures need work because they make the story a little hard to read at times. Good job and keep on writing my dude!
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