The story is one of the best I’ve read and enjoyed completely. There is always room to improve but your doing great with this story. The only thing that really needs an upgrade is Update stability.
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it's hard to update when I'm writing chapters for the other fanfics at the same time.
Ik im not complaining just giving Constructive criticism.
And some other advice, focus on one Fan-Fic at once if you have limited time during the day because of either school or work. I tried writing two different fan-fics at the same time one time and the ideas i had for each kept clashing in my mind, so i nist stopped writing cause of the stress and headaches it gave me. Not saying that im right and your wrong with what your doing, just giving advice from past experience.
