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FantasyLover83
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2021-06-23 09:27

Hahaha!!! I loved the part about the almond! Tooo funny! You put passion into describing his hatred of it. This is a second book to the first one with one of the characters from the first one in it. Author is very descriptive.

High in pursuit: Another Story

nia94
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54 Chs

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nia_94
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thank you. glad you enjoyed it

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ibbygal
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The plot is so interesting and humorous at the same time. The synopsis alone got my attention. the characters have really interesting dialogue going on. kudos to the author.🙌🏽

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Ms_Jane
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Hi, I just want to say that this is a great story. The plot is very interesting. The sypnosis caught my attention right away. I felt a connection with your character. I love it! This story deserves a lot of readers. You're a great Author! keep safe! 😊

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Pryges
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This story is really interesting, the author really did a great job to write this story, I don't usually read transmigrate or shifting soul story, but the ML is kinda funny and made me want to know more about him. I am looking forward to more!!

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Miss_Elated03
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More Romance 😍, way more better with humor. You gave us both!!! Thank you for such a good book. Very relatable characters, there's nothing else to ask for [img=exp][img=fp][img=coins][img=recommend]

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Timmytamtams
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Really interesting synopsis! The way the plot develops throughout the chapters makes it an interesting book to read! Would definitely recommend it if you are looking for something new and unique to explore😊👍

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Eny_Williams
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I just finished reading the first chapter of this book and I'm already hooked as it is, I'm looking forward to seeing and getting more acquainted with the characters as I continue the story. Bravo author

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Maritaz_Oduro
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I really enjoyed this book so much... Jae Woon and Vermillion being one person and all... This is my first manga story if that's what they call it and I loved it... Keep it up... Nice work

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Bethel_Gold
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Another great story from the awesome author!!! you never disappoint and i am glad i took time out to read your works. this is amazing, keep it up

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Lhdjia
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The plot is quite interesting and I was intrigued by synopsis. The characters have really interesting relationships with each other. Not bad, highly recommended. Keep up the good job author!

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Entrail_JI
Entrail_JILv15

Writing quality : Generally quite good apart from some mistakes that are present. I modified one of the paragraphs of his story to show how he could fix some of the mistakes. One day, his best friend, Han Ryan was murdered by a serial killer and Jae Woon felt his whole world crumbling down. Due to his excessive sadness, alone in his home, to numb the pain from experiencing the loss of his friend, Jae Woon drowned himself with endless amounts of alcohol ranging from the likes of soju and rice wine. As he indulged himself in junk food and drinks like there was no tomorrow, suddenly, out of nowhere his body convulsed in an allergic reaction. Stability of updates : Looks to be about 2-4 a week, I will still give 5 stars as it seems like the author is picking up the speed at which he/she is uploading Story development : So far so good! I really loved everything up to chapter 10, though I would say that turning this book premium at only 10 chapters is a bit extreme as I would suggest turning chapters from 30 chapters on as 10 chapters is not enough to hook a person full-on into the story. But, you do you, I will still give you (5-stars) Character design : Story too short for me to judge regarding this so I will give it 5 stars World background : Same situation as character design, but it seems promising so I will still go with 5-stars Overall, the story is excellent, apart from some minor English mistakes that can be fixed through either hiring an editor or Grammarly if you are yet not using it, nothing seems out of the norm. Keep up the good work

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