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2021-07-04 19:37

I really enjoyed this book so much... Jae Woon and Vermillion being one person and all... This is my first manga story if that's what they call it and I loved it... Keep it up... Nice work

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thanks for reading😁

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Entrail_JI
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Writing quality : Generally quite good apart from some mistakes that are present. I modified one of the paragraphs of his story to show how he could fix some of the mistakes. One day, his best friend, Han Ryan was murdered by a serial killer and Jae Woon felt his whole world crumbling down. Due to his excessive sadness, alone in his home, to numb the pain from experiencing the loss of his friend, Jae Woon drowned himself with endless amounts of alcohol ranging from the likes of soju and rice wine. As he indulged himself in junk food and drinks like there was no tomorrow, suddenly, out of nowhere his body convulsed in an allergic reaction. Stability of updates : Looks to be about 2-4 a week, I will still give 5 stars as it seems like the author is picking up the speed at which he/she is uploading Story development : So far so good! I really loved everything up to chapter 10, though I would say that turning this book premium at only 10 chapters is a bit extreme as I would suggest turning chapters from 30 chapters on as 10 chapters is not enough to hook a person full-on into the story. But, you do you, I will still give you (5-stars) Character design : Story too short for me to judge regarding this so I will give it 5 stars World background : Same situation as character design, but it seems promising so I will still go with 5-stars Overall, the story is excellent, apart from some minor English mistakes that can be fixed through either hiring an editor or Grammarly if you are yet not using it, nothing seems out of the norm. Keep up the good work

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